You are the roast beef I have purchased
and I stuff you with my very own onion.
You are a boat I have rented by the hour
and I steer you with my rage until you run aground.
You are a glass that I have paid to shatter
and I swallow the pieces down with my spit.
You are the grate I warm my trembling hands on,
searing the flesh until it’s nice and juicy.
You stink like my Mama under your bra
and I vomit into your hand like a jackpot
its cold hard quarters.
This poem is so true
buying a whore is degrates both the man and women
Wanna grab lunch?
Damn this white chick be gettin raped by a fellow nigga
I can’t believe I have to do a report on this woman, poetry scares me enough as it is but this stuff TERRIFIES me!!!
how wonderful is this poem and how it describes the miserability of human condition, specially whores when they are submitted to evil….
I can’t understand the last sentence.Who can explain it for me?
jasmine from United States; it sounds to me like you don’t have the strong stomach required to enjoy confessional poetry.
I agree completely with Mack from United Kingdom, and have nothing to add since he said it all already.
This doesn’t only speak of the pain of a man buying the whore.
It’s a commentary on the mutual degradation.
“You are a glass that I have paid to shatter”
This speaks of the man degrading the whore.
“and I swallow the pieces down with my spit.”
This tells of how in the process of degradation the man destroys himself as anyone who has swallowed glass can tell you.
I would even posit that it refers in a more general sense to relationships between man and woman or indeed any relationship with an uneven power structure.
Brilliant, really.
oh my god this poem was ok i think it was kind of nasty i really dont understand why a person would write a poem like this but i did kind of like it
this poem rocks
I enjoyed the notion of vomiting cash to pay for a the services of a whore. I agree that is a painful process for a man to have pay for the companionship of a woman.
i LOVE this poem. like nicole said–its very truthful. i love this poet as well. im doing a report on her in school right now.
I think that “buying the whore” is a wonderful poem. It describes in and essance exactly what a whore is “bought” for and their use. To me it is a poem of hate and of pitty, and it is wonderful.