I

Who would be
A merman gay,
Singing alone,
Sitting alone,
With a mermaid’s knee,
For instance–hey–
For a throne?

II

I would be a merman gay;
I would sit and sing the whole day long;
I would fill my lungs with the strongest brine,
And squirt it up in a spray of song,
And soak my head in my liquid voice;
I’d curl my tail in curves divine,
And let each curve in a kink rejoice.
I’d tackle the mermaids under the sea,
And yank ’em around till they yanked me,
Sportively, sportively;
And then we would wiggle away, away,
To the pea-green groves on the coast of day,
Chasing each other sportively.

III

There would be neither moon nor star;
But the waves would twang like a wet guitar
Low thunder and thrum in the darkness grum–
Neither moon nor star;
We would shriek aloud in the dismal dales–
Shriek at each other and squawk and squeal,
“All night!” rakishly, rakishly;
They would pelt me with oysters and wiggletails,
Laughing and clapping their hands at me,
“All night!” prankishly, prankishly;
But I would toss them back in mine,
Lobsters and turtles of quaint design;
Then leaping out in an abrupt way,
I’d snatch them bald in my devilish glee,
And skip away when they snatched at me,
Fiendishly, fiendishly.
O, what a jolly life I’d lead,
Ah, what a “bang-up” life indeed!
Soft are the mermaids under the sea–
We would live merrily, merrily.

Analysis, meaning and summary of James Whitcomb Riley's poem The Merman

1 Comment

  1. Melanie says:

    I liked The Merman a lot. I liked the creativity. The way that he describes things are definetly creative plus. James Whitcomb Riley, or as I think, he also has creative ideas for the whole poem. He doesn’t pick an ordinary title at all. He makes it his own. And that is why I like his creativity. I can tell anyone I know that James Whitcomb Riley has massive creativity.

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