six
are in a room’s dark around)
five
(are all dancesing singdance all are
three
with faces made of cloud dancing and
three
singing with voices made of earth and
six are in a room’s dark around)
five
(six are in a room’s)
one
is red
and(six are in)
four are
white
(three singdance six dancesing three
all around around all
clouds singing three and
and three dancing earths
three menandwomen three
and all around all and
all around five all
around five around)
five flowers five
(six are in a room’s dark)
all five are one
flowers five flowers and all one is fire
i think bonjorno is a little to hyper and odd, griffin is too comment on the poem, the simplicity and form of the poem develops and makes the poem what it is griffin has a poem too