Comment 3 of 3, added on February 9th, 2012 at 11:58 PM.
Wish you good luck for all your eresant and conscientious efforts &
endeavours in bringing the best for us..!!
from Costa Rica
Comment 2 of 3, added on March 6th, 2010 at 5:05 PM.
Rhythm If you ever visit here again and would like a copy of this poem Mike
being read from a CD it might help you find the Rhythm you find missing in
it. It is actually 1 part of 48 different poems that make up the a major
work called “ the code” so it takes understanding he entire work to
probably catch the meaning to this particular part.
Sorry it offended you so much, best luck to you out there.
joseph mayo wristen
from United States
Comment 1 of 3, added on May 27th, 2009 at 8:08 PM.
This is horrible. It has no flow, no rhythm, why is this called poetry?
"Poems" like this one are ruining the art of poetry.
mike from United States