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Comment 26 of 46, added on June 8th, 2012 at 2:19 AM.
wind and window flower
I think the poem talks about a man or a boy who was attracted to a very
pretty woman ( when we say flower,, it means beauty ).. so the girl must
really be beautiful. Problem was,, the girl must be some kind of heavily
guarded and watched.. must be a daughter of a rich couple.. never allowed
to talk to anyone not of her kind.. so the boy just watched her from afar..
and the girl also just watched the boy from through her window..
eventually,, they managed to talk to each other but they were caught by the
guards.. thus the line,,and the breeze was found the next morning. a
hundred miles away..THE boy must have been arrested and put in prison.. A
SAD ENDING to a great love story..
raquel embang from Philippines
Comment 25 of 46, added on December 11th, 2011 at 3:47 PM.
I think this poem is about a murder. Birds symbolize the relationship
between the heavens and the earth, and the wind (the boy) is cold like
death. It also mentions witnesses (like of a crime). Flowers and cold do
not go together. When the flower leaned aside, I think that is her death.
Flowers die when the first frost comes (winter wind).
Annie from United States
Comment 24 of 46, added on December 13th, 2010 at 11:30 AM.
has anyone ever though of the wind (man) being a player, trying to get to
the flower (woman) but being stopped by the window (third party)? just
think about it...
your mom from United States
Comment 23 of 46, added on October 25th, 2010 at 6:45 PM.
A cold person tries to court a warm one.
from United States
Comment 22 of 46, added on May 5th, 2010 at 11:31 AM.
i think that the wind(boy)s haert is broken by her. he dosnt under stand
why they cant be together like romeo and juliet.
Comment 21 of 46, added on April 23rd, 2010 at 12:29 AM.
Maybe it means this
ok i think the part about the caged bird and Frosty veil is nothing more
than imagry just trying to set up the scene. When he marks her through the
window he noticed her. the Wind(boy) is a young boy that knows more about
boy things but is naive about love. he comes over to see her and try to get
her to get her to leave with him but she said blows him off and he leaves..
Samantha from United States
Comment 20 of 46, added on April 13th, 2010 at 12:00 AM.
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Comment 19 of 46, added on March 5th, 2010 at 10:34 AM.
I'm not a poem critic.but it seems to me ‘he marked her through the pane’
means simply to notice the flower.like we notice someone special.Ofcourse
here the flower is the girl,living in a small world,calm & quiet,allowed to
watch the world from inside the window.her love is silent.And the boy is
the winter wind,the proof reader of destruction.he shows his love in every
way he can.Their differences in nature & limitations to stay aside made the
flower to refuse the wind in silence,in pain.
Comment 18 of 46, added on November 30th, 2009 at 9:40 AM.
Im having alittle trouble analysing this poem. I have estaablished the fact
the the winter breeze is the boy and the window flower is the girl, but im
not understanidng the relationship beween the two line for line.
I know that their is a love connection between the two,
"when the frosty winter veil was melted over at noon, and the caged yellow
bird hungover her in tune"
these lines have to do with imeragery, i can imagine the winter frost blew
by the flower at night, but by noon, any proof of him being there was
"he marked her through the pain, he could not help but mark, and only
passed her by, to come again at dark"
i dont understand these lines? is he hurting her???
Shannon from Canada
Comment 17 of 46, added on October 29th, 2009 at 12:00 AM.
I see this poem differently. I see it as the wind(boy) sacrificing his love
for her, as he could only hurt her. And the window flower, in a way wanted
to be with him, but didn't because he hurt her. "He marked her through the
pane, he could not help but mark" As she leaned aside he left. She would
not go against nature, they were too opposite for love.
Bec from Australia
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