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Comment 19 of 19, added on March 12th, 2009 at 12:07 AM.
I decided to make my own poem devoted to my "desert place"....
Wake up, still kinda dazy,
Why does weed make you lazy?
Take my time throughout my day
Did the teacher just say J?!?
Weird stomache feeling, please go away.
"can i go to the bathroom?" i go stray
Although there is time after i decide right now,
So to the car i race where the stash is at,
Where i go to get a bag of weed that is fat.
Unroll the dutch,
but still in class so dont put too much.
Light it and put it in the air,
im part of god now.
chi chi from United States
Comment 18 of 19, added on March 11th, 2009 at 11:26 PM.
These comments are pretty funny. People from all around the world reading
the same poem. I gotta say A-bomb is the man. I did thesame exact thing
except im smoking after my work not b4 the essay. And get my dog high too
haha. Otherthan that for someone that doesnt understand poems, i gota 115%
more understanding of the poem after reading all the comments.
Chi Chi from United States
Comment 17 of 19, added on May 20th, 2008 at 6:41 PM.
ok the poem looks iambic to me and I would guess on a pentameter. except
for that we have four stanzas with a rhyme scheme of aaba,ccbc,ddbd,eebe.
the whole thing has a song like quality- see the repetitions. the exterior
solitude is compared to the speakers inner solitude and so on. too sleepy
to continue, maybe if someone begs for it...
Abdulcabbar from Turkey
Comment 16 of 19, added on May 13th, 2008 at 12:39 AM.
I'm just saying the poem makes me sleepy.....
Gan from Taiwan
Comment 15 of 19, added on March 30th, 2008 at 3:28 PM.
haha. i love that first comment.
i am writing a five page response to this poem,and im just b.s.ing my way
through it.
this poem sucks
it has a message: the message is to honor i tin your own soul and feel the
despair he felt.
it is not ment to be put into any other words than those that frost used.
if you can't understand his message ur on crack i swear.
and i hate all english teachers that think that explicating a poem helps us
understand it, when the author intended their writing to be enjoyed and
interperated according to the listener, and enjyed.
not picked apart.
screw english courses.
kari from United States
Comment 14 of 19, added on August 5th, 2007 at 9:30 AM.
i seriously hate alllllllll of robert frosts poems!
ive been trying to research poems so i can do my essay on them and all i
got was jack shit from u guys!
for real tho how can u guys even cum up with any meanings of any poem let
alone robert's poems of absolute shit!
anyway thanx for the help guys....NOT!
i guess im gna go and fail my essay!
billy from Greece
Comment 13 of 19, added on April 23rd, 2007 at 3:59 PM.
This poem has twenty verses and 4 stanzas. It rhymes which are a: fast,
past, and last, c: theirs, lairs, and unawares, e: loneliness, less, and
express, and f: spaces and places. He also use alliteration such as "Snow
falling and night falling fast, oh, fast:. His tone towards this poem is
sadness, loneliness, and quiet.
Tanyarat from United States
Comment 12 of 19, added on April 26th, 2006 at 9:17 PM.
this is so magical i love it
zarka from United States
Comment 11 of 19, added on February 26th, 2006 at 7:39 AM.
i think that we can feel the magic of this poem in the last line!!!!!
assma alatwna from Palestine
Comment 10 of 19, added on February 23rd, 2006 at 9:20 AM.
in this poem the author uses 'desert' as a metaphor for lonliness. he
trying to say that in his world he has nobody to share it with. he is
comparing his life to a desert.
Olga from United States
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I decided to make my own poem devoted to my "desert place"....
Wake up, still kinda dazy,
Why does weed make you lazy?
Take my time throughout my day
Did the teacher just say J?!?
Weird stomache feeling, please go away.
"can i go to the bathroom?" i go stray
Although there is time after i decide right now,
So to the car i race where the stash is at,
Where i go to get a bag of weed that is fat.
Unroll the dutch,
but still in class so dont put too much.
Light it and put it in the air,
im part of god now.
chi chi from United States