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Poet: Robert Frost (Robert Frost Art)
Poem: Desert Places
Volume: A Further Range
Year: Published/Written in 1936
Comment 19 of 19, added on March 12th, 2009 at 12:07 AM.
I decided to make my own poem devoted to my "desert place"....
Wake up, still kinda dazy,
Why does weed make you lazy?
Take my time throughout my day
Did the teacher just say J?!?
Weird stomache feeling, please go away.
"can i go to the bathroom?" i go stray
Although there is time after i decide right now,
So to the car i race where the stash is at,
Where i go to get a bag of weed that is fat.
Unroll the dutch,
but still in class so dont put too much.
Light it and put it in the air,
im part of god now.
chi chi from United States
Comment 18 of 19, added on March 11th, 2009 at 11:26 PM.
These comments are pretty funny. People from all around the world reading the same poem. I gotta say A-bomb is the man. I did thesame exact thing except im smoking after my work not b4 the essay. And get my dog high too haha. Otherthan that for someone that doesnt understand poems, i gota 115% more understanding of the poem after reading all the comments.
Chi Chi from United States
Comment 17 of 19, added on May 20th, 2008 at 6:41 PM.
ok the poem looks iambic to me and I would guess on a pentameter. except for that we have four stanzas with a rhyme scheme of aaba,ccbc,ddbd,eebe. the whole thing has a song like quality- see the repetitions. the exterior solitude is compared to the speakers inner solitude and so on. too sleepy to continue, maybe if someone begs for it...
Abdulcabbar from Turkey
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I decided to make my own poem devoted to my "desert place"....
Wake up, still kinda dazy,
Why does weed make you lazy?
Take my time throughout my day
Did the teacher just say J?!?
Weird stomache feeling, please go away.
"can i go to the bathroom?" i go stray
Although there is time after i decide right now,
So to the car i race where the stash is at,
Where i go to get a bag of weed that is fat.
Unroll the dutch,
but still in class so dont put too much.
Light it and put it in the air,
im part of god now.
chi chi from United States