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Comment 2 of 2, added on October 6th, 2005 at 6:34 PM.
The tone of the poem is of the intense solitude of the woman
speaking---she is empty at that window, watching the world go by----and the
monologue is grating against the reader.......the poet inserts annoying
parts that make it run-on, and on, and on, and she never stops to end a
thought--she always qualifies it, with a "but I don't know", and a "no
end", and many other exasperated inconclusive thoughts amidst the supposed
peace and tranquility that this servant-to-servants-gone-camping represents
as a co-owner of a "resort".
Jim K. from United States
Comment 1 of 2, added on November 12th, 2004 at 4:52 PM.
it's dope
Jerome from United States
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The tone of the poem is of the intense solitude of the woman
speaking---she is empty at that window, watching the world go by----and the
monologue is grating against the reader.......the poet inserts annoying
parts that make it run-on, and on, and on, and she never stops to end a
thought--she always qualifies it, with a "but I don't know", and a "no
end", and many other exasperated inconclusive thoughts amidst the supposed
peace and tranquility that this servant-to-servants-gone-camping represents
as a co-owner of a "resort".
Jim K. from United States