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Robert Lowell - For the Union Dead

"Relinquunt Omnia Servare Rem Publicam." 

The old South Boston Aquarium stands
in a Sahara of snow now.  Its broken windows are boarded.
The bronze weathervane cod has lost half its scales.
The airy tanks are dry.

Once my nose crawled like a snail on the glass;
my hand tingled
to burst the bubbles
drifting from the noses of the cowed, compliant fish.

My hand draws back.  I often sigh still
for the dark downward and vegetating kingdom
of the fish and reptile.  One morning last March,
I pressed against the new barbed and galvanized

fence on the Boston Common.  Behind their cage,
yellow dinosaur steamshovels were grunting
as they cropped up tons of mush and grass
to gouge their underworld garage.

Parking spaces luxuriate like civic
sandpiles in the heart of Boston.
A girdle of orange, Puritan-pumpkin colored girders
braces the tingling Statehouse, 

shaking over the excavations, as it faces Colonel Shaw
and his bell-cheeked Negro infantry
on St. Gaudens' shaking Civil War relief,
propped by a plank splint against the garage's earthquake.

Two months after marching through Boston,
half the regiment was dead;
at the dedication,
William James could almost hear the bronze Negroes breathe.

Their monument sticks like a fishbone
in the city's throat.
Its Colonel is as lean
as a compass-needle.

He has an angry wrenlike vigilance,
a greyhound's gently tautness;
he seems to wince at pleasure,
and suffocate for privacy.

He is out of bounds now.  He rejoices in man's lovely,
peculiar power to choose life and die--
when he leads his black soldiers to death,
he cannot bend his back.

On a thousand small town New England greens,
the old white churches hold their air
of sparse, sincere rebellion; frayed flags
quilt the graveyards of the Grand Army of the Republic. 

The stone statues of the abstract Union Soldier
grow slimmer and younger each year--
wasp-waisted, they doze over muskets
and muse through their sideburns . . .

Shaw's father wanted no monument
except the ditch,
where his son's body was thrown
and lost with his "niggers."

The ditch is nearer.
There are no statues for the last war here;
on Boylston Street, a commercial photograph
shows Hiroshima boiling

over a Mosler Safe, the "Rock of Ages"
that survived the blast.  Space is nearer.
When I crouch to my television set,
the drained faces of Negro school-children rise like balloons.

Colonel Shaw
is riding on his bubble,
he waits
for the blessèd break.

The Aquarium is gone.  Everywhere,
giant finned cars nose forward like fish;
a savage servility
slides by on grease.

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For the Union Dead - Comments and Information

Poet: Robert Lowell (Robert Lowell Art)
Poem: For the Union Dead
Volume: Life Studies and For the Union Dead
Year: Published/Written in 1964

Comment 8 of 8, added on January 13th, 2009 at 12:31 AM.

Lowell wasn't trying to write a sentimental glorification of war, but to comment on how a consumerist America thought parking lots more important. What's "mediocre" isn't the poem, it's the people who in savage servility slide by on grease.



Edward G. Nilges from United States
Comment 7 of 8, added on August 17th, 2008 at 6:55 PM.

Peter's comments helped me see what I was struggling with as I studied this poem. I particularly thrilled to his insight into the function of form: "What is missing is clarity and form; clarity of meaning, and the economy and intensity of expression that form gives. " --- Linda's comments are just beautifully written, with a charming liveliness and presence, that adorn her fine (expansion of Peter's?) essay. I was pleased, too, with her firm distinction between the events addressed by the poem and the poem itself. --- I do agree with both writers and was disappointed by the poem itself; it strikes me as quite sophomoric, actually. --- Thank you all very much for entering my life thus and, thus, enhancing it.

Susan Jeswine O'Shea from United States
Comment 6 of 8, added on March 29th, 2008 at 11:35 AM.

Funny how many of these comments were written in spring. In the harshness of a New England spring, the place where I sit writing this, the weather is both glorious and raw. It is much like Lowell's poem, the movie "Glory" and the romance attached to the Mass 54.
The romance is earned but then, I am a romantic. Dr. King once wrote that he would be just as dead at 80 as 30 so whynot die for something you believe in. He, too, a romantic.
And a pragmatist of the highest order.
As it happens, I am married to a Shaw descendent, named after the good colonel, actually. And I worked beside a descendant of the Mass. 54th flag-bearer. William Carney. No one mentions him here or in the poem although Carney was the first African American to win a Congressional Medal of Honor for his bravery at Wagner.
But you can google Carney on your own.
About Lowell's poem, well, I agree with Belarus. It is mediocre. But the subject is glorious. I will not get the two confused. The poem rambles. Yes, ambiguity is a poet's lance, however, the ambiguous is made clear in a good poem: an idea, a feeling is caught and held together.
Lowell is miserable and bitter. At least, that's the poet's voice in a poem that links urban life in the 1960s to a historic event far greater than bull-dozers digging up Boston Common.
What is Lowell saying? That he finds complaint in everything. What does he seem to say about the 54th? That the only name worth mentioning is Shaw's (Frederick Douglass had 2 sons in this company). That his father preferred the ditch. So did his mother. They both felt the son would have chosen that "honor" of being buried with his men in that fashion at that time.
History is buried there: the cultural slights of a time of racism and gentlemanly behavior meeting on a battleground. A different history is in that grave than just who won and lost.
Lowell's poem is a good idea but it is not a good poem.
(Note: MLK's speech before the march on Selma, may have the referenced ages wrong but the point is the same.)

linda from United States

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