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Comment 2 of 2, added on March 9th, 2007 at 6:31 AM.
oh, thank you for pointing this one out. I can't stand Ezra Pound but this
one actually makes perfect sense to me.
but it's 8-6-7 so no, not a haiku. lol.
ea
Comment 1 of 2, added on September 8th, 2005 at 2:39 PM.
It's treatment seems Haiku. But,it has too many
beats (7/6/7) and Haiku's are 5/7/5. But, like a
Haiku it relates its deeper meaning with nature
metaphores. Ochre an natural iron ore used as pigment is expressive of
lives lived and leaving their imprint on life (he indicates stone) after
they're gone. Orange leaves to me say Autumn. And maybe the the rose
leaf imprints left behind clinging to 'stone' is the memory of it after it
has gone.
Cheryl Wilkie from United States
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oh, thank you for pointing this one out. I can't stand Ezra Pound but this
one actually makes perfect sense to me.
but it's 8-6-7 so no, not a haiku. lol.
ea