Comment 4 of 4, added on August 4th, 2014 at 4:17 PM.
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Comment 3 of 4, added on August 3rd, 2014 at 2:52 PM.
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from Congo, Democratic Republic of
Comment 2 of 4, added on April 5th, 2010 at 4:37 PM.
By A Departing Light - Decks the Rays
Pardon this comment on a comment left about five years ago. I don't even
know whether this is still active, but here goes:
I read "Decks the Rays" as something like sorts the rays, shows the rays in
their places in the spectrum of light, lets you see the clarity of the
spectrum of rays in great detail. That would be consistent with the
remainder of the poem. Decks is like showing the strata of the rays. If
anything the common definitions that might come close are the decks of a
ship or a deck of cards, but turn that into a verb and deck the rays, sort
them, stack them. let their order and differences be seen.
from United States
Comment 1 of 4, added on August 19th, 2008 at 3:59 AM.
I have used this poem as a metaphor for separation, but it is an
unsentimental one. I think it suggests that with distance (or separation),
we may get more clarity, and might even begin to expand upon what we
experienced. The use of the word "decks" was confusing, but I figured out
that she probably meant something like embellishes (as in Deck the Halls
with Boughs of Holly).
Helen Stein from United States