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Comment 3 of 3, added on April 12th, 2006 at 8:20 PM.
Lord opened sea - Moses behind-I AM,
Lord invited us - A Land before-I AM,
I AM - Who - I AM
Life is the bread of heaven,
doeth come down, and feedth;
His Will - be done - as we pray
is a complete - gracious Gift.
Who Is He - Son of Nun,
the Promise - 14th of Hebrew's Abraham,
the King - 14th of Isreal's David,
the Messiah - 14th after Judah's Rebuild;
Himself - the One - waited and rejected;
Himself - the One - eternal and unchangeable.
In One - and only thru Him-
Son of Nun obtained his name - by His glorious Name.
'Tis Sign before us - His Son-
'Tis His Son in us and with us-
A Light shines in the darkness-
Mary jumped for joy-
Her Son visited us-
the strangers in the world - found rest!
Laijon Liu from United States
Comment 2 of 3, added on January 8th, 2006 at 11:55 AM.
i love this poem ! i impowers me to live every day !
i am a wonder ful poet - i love my work!
joe from United States
Comment 1 of 3, added on March 4th, 2005 at 6:32 PM.
This is my favourite poem. I love the cadence of the second stanza,
especially the line, "Himself-himself diversify". It gives it a meandering
hurry when read.
Rilkey
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Lord opened sea - Moses behind-I AM,
Lord invited us - A Land before-I AM,
I AM - Who - I AM
Life is the bread of heaven,
doeth come down, and feedth;
His Will - be done - as we pray
is a complete - gracious Gift.
Who Is He - Son of Nun,
the Promise - 14th of Hebrew's Abraham,
the King - 14th of Isreal's David,
the Messiah - 14th after Judah's Rebuild;
Himself - the One - waited and rejected;
Himself - the One - eternal and unchangeable.
In One - and only thru Him-
Son of Nun obtained his name - by His glorious Name.
'Tis Sign before us - His Son-
'Tis His Son in us and with us-
A Light shines in the darkness-
Mary jumped for joy-
Her Son visited us-
the strangers in the world - found rest!
Laijon Liu from United States