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Analysis and comments on Concord Hymn by Ralph Waldo Emerson

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Comment 10 of 20, added on March 22nd, 2006 at 4:08 PM.

dude i think that poem is not elementryish i mean really guys come on and
give the guy some clap for what he did goodness i mean really ya guys must
be horrible if ya think thats bad.....

wtf from Australia
Comment 9 of 20, added on January 13th, 2006 at 3:17 PM.

In times past!
We have all known about the conflict of might!
And how a stronghold was broken at last!
When America asserted her might!
How a shot was heard around the world!
And then America her Glory unfurled!
Freedom found true freedom!
Peace found true peace!
And Ralph Waldo Emerson His talent he did release!
Don't judge the heart of a poet!
Or God could pronounce you unrelavant before you know it!
It tiz a noble endeavor!
And at times can be clever!
If war!
If a personal score!
If love!
If regret!
Ralph Waldo Emerson is one of the best poets yet!
And the thoughts of a man are like deep water!
But God draws them out just like he created the oceans of water!
So write a poem or two!
won't you?
And you will see!
It is better to write than to critisize Ralph or me!
And if you meet the God of the Universe!
He will in this voice with you rehearse!
So learn and read some verse!
And never curse!
the shot that was heard around the world is still be
heard today!
It is just another battlefield I say!
So listen for the voice that doth glisten!
And really listen!
And you will hear the Spirit heard around the world!
And then a Heavenly Glory infurled!
And then my friend God will change your world!

Art Speakman from United States
Comment 8 of 20, added on November 28th, 2005 at 10:23 PM.

Just a small addition to what Kevin had to say about "Concord Hymn." For
any of you who need help with this poem, I hope you may find this useful.

Ralph Waldo Emerson was a Transcendentalist. In Transcendentalism, one
believes that there exists an omnipresent divine spirit which is shared by
humankind and nature. Although this poem does not depict nature in
relation to humans, Emerson does note a Spirit that drove the homespun
Americans to fight at Concord, and I think that he may be referring to this
oversoul, if not God. Transcendentalism also puts an emphasis on
individualism, self-trust, self-reliance, self-sufficiency. Succinctly
put, it's partly about independence, which is the core reason for the
American Revolution (the Battle of Concord was the first American victory,
Lexington was the first battle, Kevin). The relation of Transcendentalism
to the poem in those respects should be evident that it is written to honor
the men who fought for American freedom and independence.

Furthermore...
"the shot heard round the world" is a figure of speech that Emerson uses to
describe the effects of that battle. Obviously, this showdown between
Britain and America was of great importance. Just a little history behind
the battle: In April 1775 the British commander in Boston sent troops to
Concord... They fought at Lexington, (and killed so many with so few
casualties of their own that some consider it a massacre) then moved on to
Concord, where they were forced to retreat by the "homespun Americans," a
term used to describe the home-made way of life that many Americans led in
this revolutionary period. The battle is described as a "shot," which is a
fabulous example of a metonymy, which is a figure of speech in which an
attribute is substituted for the whole (such as "crown" to represent a
monarchy, if that better explains it...). Then, for it to be "heard round
the world" showed that the battle definately attracted a great deal of
attention. The sound of a shot is sharp, piercing, and distinct. It rings
out and the echo lingers, as does the memory of the men who fought for our
country's liberty.

Chelsea-ann from United States
Comment 7 of 20, added on November 22nd, 2005 at 1:03 PM.

Who is to know what was in the heart of this great poet unless they were
him.

Amber from United States
Comment 6 of 20, added on November 16th, 2005 at 7:10 PM.

First I'd like to say that every so far who has commented on this forum,
except Kevin, is stupid and immature. Shut the hell up or actually say
something meaningful.

Emerson wrote this poem to touch the hearts of those effected by this
battle; the grieving mothers, and now fatherless children. The words of
this poem strike soundly and if you ever hear it sung, please listen to it.
Put to a slow rhythm, the words begin to have a greater effect. Emerson is
a great poet for taking the time to give so much comfort to the poeple
grieving.

John from United States
Comment 5 of 20, added on October 13th, 2005 at 5:45 PM.

Bif, obviously you're elementary on poems. whoever said a poem needs good
rythm to convey a good message?

PoetMaster6000 from United States
Comment 4 of 20, added on October 10th, 2005 at 9:11 AM.

You all need help. Bif, Emerson is considered one of the greatest poets of
his time, if not his generation. If you want to criticize a poet read some
Dickinson.

Kevin you want to hook a brother up with some Emerson info? I'm doin a
report and need some help.

Ryan from United States
Comment 3 of 20, added on March 11th, 2005 at 10:46 AM.

I believe that this poem was incredibaly well written, even though Kevin
seemed to help me better undersatand the meaning, Thank You Kevin. Kevin
you have opened my eyes to a newer and better future of poetry. Your an
inspiration.

Kelmatt from United States
Comment 2 of 20, added on December 2nd, 2004 at 12:52 PM.

This poem of course is about the first battle of the American Revolution
which was in Concord. The following is an explication of the poem.
In the first line Emerson describes the bridge in which the battle took
place. This bridge was apparently underdeveloped. The second line tells of
the American flag of the revolutionaries being held in the wind. Apparently
the revolutionaries were mostly farmers there at the time which is the 3rd
line. Here in line 4 “the shot heard around the world” expresses how for
the first time in history a colonial nation revolted against the British
government.
Line 5 says it has been a long time since the British have raised a gun as
does line 6 about the Americans. In line seven the famous bridge that the
battle took place on has become ruined and no longer stands. All remnants
of the bridge are headed to the sea where it will disappear for good
according to line 8.
As proposed in line 9, there is a gathering for a monument on the bank of
the stream where the old bridge stood. In line 10 they talk of setting a
monument that will represent their wish to always remember what happened
there and the men who were involved. This is further set as true in line 11
where it specifically asks that the deed done by the farmers be always
redeemed. In 12 it says that they hope that the monument will help others
remember far in the future as well.
In line 13 Emerson talks to God and line 14 he tells says of the men who
thanks to their courage helped to set free the American people. In the 15th
line Emerson asks that the monument be spared the ware of time and 16 he
describes this memorial as a shaft which is erected to both God and to them
men who fought at the battle


Kevin from United States
Comment 1 of 20, added on October 19th, 2004 at 3:20 PM.

This piece by Emerson can be described simply as that a piece. I believe
that it is one of the worst pieces of literature I have read in a very long
time. The rythme is elementary and the use of rythme could use a lot of
work.

Bif from United States

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Poet: Ralph Waldo Emerson
Poem: Concord Hymn
Added: Feb 21 2003
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