buy me an ounce and i’ll sell you a pound.
slimmer the finger the thicker the thumb(it’s
round and round
early to better is wiser for worse.
order a steak and they send us a pie(it’s
mine is yours
ask me the name of the moon in the man.
hole in the ocean will never be missed(it’s
yours is mine
either was deafer than neither was dumb.
under the wonder is over the why(it’s
here we come
This poem seems very sneaky and provocative. I love it and I’m considering using it for an annotation at school.
dis poem wuz tottally awsome dude! he rox my sox
Uh, I think this is rather graphic. I may be wrong, but this sounds rather sexual.
It’s like being clobbered over the head by a pro baseball player with a foam rubber bat…
I thought this poem was about something that i wouldnt think a professional poem would be about! I still dont know what it means but if it is what i think then thats awesome!!! **toke toke**
When I first read the title I thought that this poem was about somthing totally different. Now that I have read it it really make no sence to me!