Comment 7 of 7, added on December 18th, 2015 at 9:59 PM.
i like this poem. it describe a separation of two lovers. the woman must be
younger than the man, the man let her go for he wants to give her a young
morning, sunlight, firm day, a green (spring)rather than a cold, fragile
days with an old man. so he said to her: go and kiss me, remember me, kiss
me and go.
Comment 6 of 7, added on April 11th, 2014 at 4:26 PM.
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Comment 5 of 7, added on May 5th, 2010 at 6:31 PM.
up into the silence the green is about a man lossing his lover. the "up
into the silence the green" is a ground barriel place, death. the earth.
and "Silence with white earth in it." is seeing heaven. his lover going to
heaven. (kiss me down into your memory & a memory & memory i will go)-his
lover is now only a memory left in his head, her physical repensitation is
no longer there. only images of his lover are left in his head.
Comment 4 of 7, added on November 1st, 2005 at 7:12 PM.
ashley from United States
Comment 3 of 7, added on October 14th, 2005 at 5:59 AM.
Fresh, green, soft, like spring. The sort of poem that is too good for
analysis, I just like to read it over and over.
Comment 2 of 7, added on July 12th, 2005 at 11:18 AM.
Great poem. I am imagining two lovers parting in the morning, perhaps their
love is a secret and the young lady must go before her absense is noted,
and her lover understands why she must go and insists she does but at the
same time will not allow her to leave, continuating their lovemaking. It is
from United States
Comment 1 of 7, added on January 12th, 2005 at 5:41 PM.
my favorite poem and the reason for my first kiss,
from United States