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Comment 2 of 2, added on February 13th, 2006 at 7:06 PM.
I feel the sounds add a lot to the message.
They... add a sense of passage to me.
dan
Comment 1 of 2, added on December 15th, 2005 at 6:34 PM.
Did anybody else realize that if you took out all of the "Tictocs" and
"toctics" in the first stanza, it makes much more sense. and also in the
last stanza, if you take all of the "kiss's" it has a very powerful
message.
kmom from United States
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I feel the sounds add a lot to the message.
They... add a sense of passage to me.
dan