Comment 4 of 4, added on March 6th, 2006 at 11:26 PM.
this poem is so hot, i heart it.
i like the action and stuff, alice is a pimp.
juicy from Mexico
Comment 3 of 4, added on December 9th, 2005 at 10:16 PM.
I think this poem is just about a drunken bar room fight over a girl named
Alice. But that is just what I think after reading it only once and
running on about 5 hours of sleep in the past few days...so who knows?
Sean from United States
Comment 2 of 4, added on November 18th, 2005 at 11:31 AM.
'k, that's weird. I'm in 8th grade too. I like the poem because the
action of the words made it seem like you were actually in the scene, even
though you don't know exactly what's going on.
Comment 1 of 4, added on February 3rd, 2005 at 2:26 PM.
im am in the 8th grade and to me this poem doesnt make any sense. The words
however do come alive. They create a mood, and as a ametuer poet, it seems
extraodinary. See my poems consist of love, boys, and lust. This means so