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Analysis and comments on may i feel said he by e.e. cummings

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Comment 38 of 158, added on February 26th, 2007 at 3:22 PM.

i love this poem... cummings is an amazing writer

AJ from United States
Comment 37 of 158, added on April 24th, 2006 at 10:58 AM.

I don't understand all of Cummings writing, but this piece speaks to me
because it is so real. It is a scene that has been played out for
generations and generations and I still don't think that it has all of the
recognition it deserves.

Cherish from United States
Comment 36 of 158, added on April 18th, 2006 at 10:54 AM.

This poem rocks. It got me laid with four different women in three
different decades. I owe cummings a bottle of the finest single malt
scotch.

zoroaster from United States
Comment 35 of 158, added on April 17th, 2006 at 7:21 PM.

omg this poem is to sexual

maya from United States
Comment 34 of 158, added on April 9th, 2006 at 9:56 PM.

thsi poem has imspired me so much. throughout my life, i realised that
there are many things due to this poem. you've completely inspired me.
thank you

Melissa from Canada
Comment 33 of 158, added on March 19th, 2006 at 8:10 AM.

Just found this website...love it. This poem is perfection. As a matter
of fact, I plan on writing it in a card for someone I hope will "get it".

susan from United States
Comment 32 of 158, added on March 2nd, 2006 at 5:04 PM.

A beauty! cummings is telling us that we are always constantly being
exposed to changes therefore nothing remains static or conventional. This
is evident through his theme and style of writing. He talks about an issue
that was a taboo(sex) some centuries ago and he uses an unconventional
style of writing(lower case). Our thinking has been a result of
indoctrination in the sense that we believed what our parents and
grandparents said about there being a 'universal standard'for everything.
Even to this day, sex is an 'untalked' issue in a lot of counties despite
the fact it is so natural and real. In a similar manner, as little kids we
were led to believe that capitalisation was necessary to begin sentences
and so forth. Through this poem we are compelled to question our beliefs
and why we must we adhere to 'universal standards' if there aren't
justifications for them.

Rajni from New Zealand
Comment 31 of 158, added on January 9th, 2006 at 10:21 AM.

I visited a website in a search for information on Cummings which I think
may interest people. (The address is,
http://www.harvardmagazine.com/on-line/030585.html) In light of previous
postings, and various comments on the 'naked innocence' of the poem (to
quote Rob), I was interested to read this article by Adam Kirsch:

"Cummings [...] was part of the generation that returned from World War One
ready to demolish Victorian illusions and experiment with all kinds of
liberation, sexual and social as well as literary."

I think this liberation is mirrored in Cummings's complete disregard for
punctuation, in that the poem takes on a sense of fluidity and seems to
breakdown formal and old-fashioned views to sex. I'm intrigued however, as
to why Cummings chose such a conventional format of regular four-line
stanzas in 'may i feel said he' when his work is mostly recognised by its
more erratic visual form. Is this possibly because he's describing an act
that IS completely conventional (rather than unconventional / strange) and,
as I mentioned before, fluid? Or could it be that the poem is meant to be
comic; thus the jaunty AB rhyme scheme?

I have a theory that everything Cummings has enclosed in brackets is
actually a thought, rather than something the characters say out-loud.
Ideas on this: anyone…?

Lastly, I particularly love the line, ‘but it’s life said he’, which for me
encapsulates the simplistic beauty of the poem; the idea that sex is
beautiful, natural, and that it’s a reason for living. Cummings himself
apparently went through a number of marriages and affairs, which would seem
to explain his enthusiasm for expressing his joy of physical love!

Jo from United Kingdom
Comment 30 of 158, added on December 27th, 2005 at 2:23 PM.

cummings has long been my favorite American poet. I read this for the
first time when I was about 17 - and read it over an over, totally turned
on by its exquisite sensuality. At 57, I am still turned on by the work,
this time by its insight, purity and naked innocence.

Rob from United States
Comment 29 of 158, added on November 12th, 2005 at 7:40 PM.

Beautiful economy of words and simplicity of expression to create vivid,
though complex, identification with poet's romantic playfulness.

William Chase from United States

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