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e.e. cummings - a man who had fallen among thieves

a man who had fallen among thieves
lay by the roadside on his back
dressed in fifteenthrate ideas
wearing a round jeer for a hat 

fate per a somewhat more than less
emancipated evening
had in return for consciousness
endowed him with a changeless grin 

whereon a dozen staunch and Meal
citizens did graze at pause
then fired by hypercivic zeal
sought newer pastures or because 

swaddled with a frozen brook
of pinkest vomit out of eyes
which noticed nobody he looked
as if he did not care to rise 

one hand did nothing on the vest
its wideflung friend clenched weakly dirt
while the mute trouserfly confessed
a button solemnly inert. 

Brushing from whom the stiffened puke
i put him all into my arms
and staggered banged with terror through
a million billion trillion stars

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Poet: e.e. cummings (e.e. cummings Art)
Poem: a man who had fallen among thieves

Comment 10 of 10, added on May 20th, 2009 at 2:58 AM.

Friends,
Withy all due respect to your intellectual perceptions, this poem went straight into me as a tale related around the experience of seeing a fellow being in spiritual need and, without a thought for reputation and personal safety, responding.
I have been in a few situations where my fellows looked aghast as I assisted someone in distress who did not fit into their world: a street person lunging into traffic, a homeless woman weeping on a street corner, a newly-blind man without a dog or a cane who was falling into the bushes.
Helping people in this way can be a very difficult situation. The ego warns us not to get involved. We might catch lice, we might get robbed, we might be forced to weep in public for the pain of another. To me, that was what Cummings was talking about when he spoke of being banged by a million, billion, trillion stars.
Lovingly, Sonam

Sonam from United States
Comment 9 of 10, added on December 5th, 2008 at 1:59 PM.

I agree with Christina that the correct wording is "staunch and leal," not "staunch and Meal". In every anthology in which I have seen the poem, as well as in the Collected Poems, "leal" is the word. And her explanation of the meaning is also correct.

Darrell Shreve from United States
Comment 8 of 10, added on May 1st, 2006 at 1:16 PM.

I would have to agree with others below who point to the biblical references in this poem. Our very first clue is “fallen amongst thieves,” i.e. Christ on the cross between two thieves; and, of course, the good Samaritan story, as others have pointed out. However, in my view, cummings is only using this as a allegorical vehicle. The clue here is the “pinkish” vomit. I believe this to be a reference to socialists and/or communists who openly criticized cummings during his career.

These “staunch” citizens are seeing the “Christ-like” character through their own “pinkish” filters, their judgmental (frozen) and condescending (swaddled) approach, rightly described as “vomit” by cummings. In the Bible, Christ himself often criticized religious zealots as “hypocrites and vipers.” The protagonist is rejecting their feigned overtures (which noticed nobody). He does not wish to rise; he has exchanged “consciousness” (in this context referring to “hypercivic zeal”) for a changeless grin. He’s not taking himself so seriously, at least not as seriously as those seeing through filters of “pinkish” vomit. He is heart-connected but in a natural way (one hand did nothing on the vest), and, to a degree (button solemnly inert), earthy, embodied (clenched weakly dirt).

And lastly, to our good Samaritan: This is a guess here, but I’m thinking the good Samaritan and the Christ-like figure are one and the same. Perhaps they were one and the same from the beginning, or perhaps they have merged through genuine empathy – “i put him ALL into my arms.” – which, if true, gives the poet another ‘crack’ at the contrived concern of the “staunch and Meal citizens” (who just might, in the end, be the thieves also!). The narrator, whoever he is, is also saying that he does not have all the answers either. In fact, he’s “staggering” humbly – “banged with terror” – through the universe looking for… what? True empathy? Authenticity? Or, perhaps Truth itself…

Brian Haley from Canada

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