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Comment 2 of 2, added on April 8th, 2006 at 4:42 PM.
I love this poem. A man stricken by an unttainable love, and is left
feeling empty like the absurd images he describes. He can't let go of his
feelings, because everytime she refuses him he loves her even more. The
last line of each stanza is repeated, but the final line has one slight
alteration. Both of the "i's" are lower case. I think saying that finally
he can't handle it anymore and is now so weakened he is no longer whole.
GiGi
Comment 1 of 2, added on March 17th, 2005 at 2:35 PM.
Implosion, explosion...fission, fusion...being, non-being, e.e. has it all.
What a collection of images!
Don Frenette from Canada
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I love this poem. A man stricken by an unttainable love, and is left
feeling empty like the absurd images he describes. He can't let go of his
feelings, because everytime she refuses him he loves her even more. The
last line of each stanza is repeated, but the final line has one slight
alteration. Both of the "i's" are lower case. I think saying that finally
he can't handle it anymore and is now so weakened he is no longer whole.
GiGi