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Comment 10 of 10, added on November 10th, 2012 at 4:16 AM.
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I Saw an Angel :
Today I saw an angel
And birds moving around
At a stand of books and books
And the angel smiles and looks
Somewhere deep into god;
As alone I stood in fire
And held book of desire,
The angel’s eyes and lips
And words and wings of heaven
Proved what needn’t be proven
And gave the touch of god
Altair Laahad (All Rights Reserved)
Altair Laahad
Comment 9 of 10, added on February 21st, 2011 at 12:31 PM.
On The Death Of Friends In Childhood
This poem brings up a lot of questions. Does the child know the difference
between heaven or hell? What is moving about it is that Justice wants to
seek the child out in the shadows or his memories. He wants a crisp picture
of his lost friend. Very Moving
Joe from United States
Comment 8 of 10, added on February 20th, 2010 at 4:55 PM.
Personally, this poem by justice is extremely well written. The way he
simply states, "we shall not ever meet them beared in heaven"(line 1) shows
how the innocence of his lost friend will be preserved. Lovely, simply
lovely.
Laura from United States
Comment 7 of 10, added on February 20th, 2010 at 4:55 PM.
Personally, this poem by justice is extremely well written. The way he
simply states, "we shall not ever meet them beared in heaven"(line 1) shows
how the innocence of his lost friend will be preserved. Lovely, simply
lovely.
Laura from United States
Comment 6 of 10, added on November 30th, 2009 at 6:50 PM.
randome stuff
it is sadf
bozo from Bahamas
Comment 5 of 10, added on April 6th, 2006 at 11:48 PM.
this poem dos'nt make sence it's sad but wat dose it mean!
natalie wiggins from Australia
Comment 4 of 10, added on December 12th, 2005 at 8:18 AM.
I kind of understand what this poem means, but at the same time, I don't
Tori from United States
Comment 3 of 10, added on February 10th, 2005 at 5:33 PM.
The creator has had touch with this type of loss and paints it well --I
thank them
Ben Qualls from United States
Comment 2 of 10, added on October 14th, 2004 at 7:17 PM.
I agree tha it is a well-typed poem, but now the rest of my day will be
crappy and depressing. That's just my opinion. I prefer blue skies and
sunshine to overcast skies and cold rain.
Kassandra from United States
Comment 1 of 10, added on September 21st, 2004 at 7:26 AM.
This is a very well typed poem
James from New Zealand
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I Saw an Angel :
Today I saw an angel
And birds moving around
At a stand of books and books
And the angel smiles and looks
Somewhere deep into god;
As alone I stood in fire
And held book of desire,
The angel’s eyes and lips
And words and wings of heaven
Proved what needn’t be proven
And gave the touch of god
Altair Laahad (All Rights Reserved)
Altair Laahad