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Comment 16 of 36, added on September 24th, 2013 at 7:34 PM.
My poem is:I would like to be a baker,So i could eat lots of yummy cakes.I
would like to be a swimmer,So i could swim ascros some lakes.I would like
to be a soldier,So i could save somebodys life.I would like to be a
vicar,So could make you man and wife.I would like to be a policeman,So i
could put teachers in jail.I would like to be a postman,So i could deliver
your mail.I would like to be a model,So i could go on the catwalk.I would
like to be a tourist,So i could go to New York. That was my poem that i did
i hope you enjoyed it
Ben from Guatemala
Comment 15 of 36, added on September 5th, 2013 at 12:33 PM.
sdFlI6 Thank you ever so for you blog.Really looking forward to read more.
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Comment 14 of 36, added on April 1st, 2011 at 12:13 PM.
what are the most important thing about you
from United States
Comment 13 of 36, added on September 3rd, 2009 at 12:28 AM.
OMG!! Lamoni still has thursday auctions and it smells soooo bad that
day...they paved over the bricks which was very sad...amish still all over
though! the whistle still sounds at 7am 12 and 6pm!
Jillian from United States
Comment 12 of 36, added on March 7th, 2008 at 12:09 PM.
What on Earth? How does manure smell sweet???
Comment 11 of 36, added on February 12th, 2008 at 10:44 AM.
I LIKE MONKEYS AND POEMS AND I LIKE POEMS ABOUT MONKEYS AND I THINK U
SHOULD MAKE ONE CUZ.. I LIKE MONKEYs....... AND CHOCALATE MILK!! POeMs
Julius from United States
Comment 10 of 36, added on July 10th, 2007 at 7:31 AM.
I read your poetry , its very sensetive , express the contembrary life
tired , me as a poet, and my friend ahmed hanafi _is a poet too _ who read
this verse , we felt that you write what we want to say , but you can say
that you said what we want
congratulation keep in touch
ashraf dossoki ali
Comment 9 of 36, added on February 19th, 2006 at 1:03 PM.
This poem is great! Relationships and feelings about them are complex
thing that are hard to write about. In writing about things like " the few
avenues", she is saying more about the nature of the couple that the actual
streets of the town. I enjoy that kind of subtelty.
Comment 8 of 36, added on June 15th, 2005 at 11:24 PM.
I would say it is about wanting more time with her better half and the line
about lake is speaking figuatively of her mind...aka
mind grows still... tired of the chaos.
I wonder if the factory isn't actually a cattle slaughterhouse and so she
has second thoughts about what her man does for a living too...hmmmm
Ed from United States
Comment 7 of 36, added on June 9th, 2005 at 12:19 AM.
your poem is very super. i like very much... every word important to our
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