Comment 14 of 14, added on April 1st, 2011 at 12:13 PM.
what are the most important thing about you
from United States
Comment 13 of 14, added on September 3rd, 2009 at 12:28 AM.
OMG!! Lamoni still has thursday auctions and it smells soooo bad that
day...they paved over the bricks which was very sad...amish still all over
though! the whistle still sounds at 7am 12 and 6pm!
Jillian from United States
Comment 12 of 14, added on March 7th, 2008 at 12:09 PM.
What on Earth? How does manure smell sweet???
Comment 11 of 14, added on February 12th, 2008 at 10:44 AM.
I LIKE MONKEYS AND POEMS AND I LIKE POEMS ABOUT MONKEYS AND I THINK U
SHOULD MAKE ONE CUZ.. I LIKE MONKEYs....... AND CHOCALATE MILK!! POeMs
Julius from United States
Comment 10 of 14, added on July 10th, 2007 at 7:31 AM.
I read your poetry , its very sensetive , express the contembrary life
tired , me as a poet, and my friend ahmed hanafi _is a poet too _ who read
this verse , we felt that you write what we want to say , but you can say
that you said what we want
congratulation keep in touch
ashraf dossoki ali
Comment 9 of 14, added on February 19th, 2006 at 1:03 PM.
This poem is great! Relationships and feelings about them are complex
thing that are hard to write about. In writing about things like " the few
avenues", she is saying more about the nature of the couple that the actual
streets of the town. I enjoy that kind of subtelty.
Comment 8 of 14, added on June 15th, 2005 at 11:24 PM.
I would say it is about wanting more time with her better half and the line
about lake is speaking figuatively of her mind...aka
mind grows still... tired of the chaos.
I wonder if the factory isn't actually a cattle slaughterhouse and so she
has second thoughts about what her man does for a living too...hmmmm
Ed from United States
Comment 7 of 14, added on June 9th, 2005 at 12:19 AM.
your poem is very super. i like very much... every word important to our
Comment 6 of 14, added on April 24th, 2005 at 12:18 AM.
Well, I've actually read better poetry than this. She needs to put a
little more work into the poems she writes. I think it may be better if she
would write poems with more energy in them. She could do better.
heather from United States
Comment 5 of 14, added on March 31st, 2005 at 4:21 PM.
I really iove all your poems dont stop writting ok i really liked the lake
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