Comment 16 of 16, added on March 4th, 2011 at 3:34 AM.
This poem was written during the Harlem Renaissance (which lasted from the
1930s up until WW1) in which African Americans (and other poor Southerners
who were jobless from the Great Depression) were migrating to industrial
cities to find a new hope and better pay. The African Americans were drawn
to Harlem in New York because it was an established African American
community in which they could support each other. The Harlem Renaissance
was a time in which African Americans showed America that they had a
cultural identity and that they were a proud people as seen with the
widespread love of jazz and certain dances such as the Stomp, both of which
originated from African Americans.
This poem exemplifies this with its analogy of waging war on a hill and the
pointlessness in doing so. There is no point in trying to fight with an
inanimate object. The first to lines show this, but without the next two
lines, this seems rather grim when stepping out of the symbolism. It says
that there is no point trying to fight the racism of the white people
(which at the time was extremely high due to the lack of jobs increasing
tension leading to riots and lynchings). The poems follows up by saying
that there is no point to waste time trying to convince the white people
who will never listen. The poem lastly provides the alternative: damaging
oneself trying to find the rising sun or hope. I believe that this is
partially irony in that Arna believes that this hope for a new world
without the racism is achievable and that the African Americans should not
just try to make do with what they have.
Anon Ymous from United States
Comment 15 of 16, added on March 31st, 2010 at 11:49 PM.
I'm sorry but have any of you actually read this poem? The actual poet,
Bontemps, lived from the beginning of the 1900s to the 1970s. If I'm not
mistaken, slavery was abolished some thirty years before then. And even
though he focuses mainly upon this aspect of the past in some other poems
it does not mean that this specific poem does as well. Has anyone given a
thought to this poem beyond fighting past white dominance? Here's a hint:
The last phrase "rising sun" may or may not mean new generation, or, more
specifically, their children. I'm just saying, Bontemps is all about
symbolism (in this context at least). "Look underneath the underneath." (I
stole this from that manga/anime Naruto but it fits perfectly with most
aspects of poetry so deal with it.)
MooSaysTheLiar from United States
Comment 14 of 16, added on May 28th, 2009 at 9:32 AM.
People from africa: this poem was written many years ago when in the united
states, slavery was around. it has nothing to do with slaves in africa 2
years ago. Excellent poem!
Betty Savage from United States
Comment 13 of 16, added on February 28th, 2009 at 8:41 PM.
This poem explores the feelings of African Americans who have to raise the
sun in the western Hemisphere. They "break" the day but they are forced to
act as terrorists. Black people are forced to be alive by whites who care
about them. This should not happen to black people. I hate them all! This
sucks! Ahhhhhh! Jews did WTC, god bless and god speed.
Comment 12 of 16, added on May 7th, 2008 at 12:24 PM.
Im not sure all of you are understanding this poem...hes not saying that we
are slaves, he is speaking in the terms of a former slave. This is a
Bontemps at his best
Franny from Germany
Comment 11 of 16, added on April 21st, 2007 at 11:45 PM.
i think that this poem has a power ful mean and that this is one of his
best works that he has hea always thinks about the slave trade as metioned
hea was a good intelligent poet
Beatriz from United States
Comment 10 of 16, added on February 11th, 2007 at 12:04 AM.
Well. English not very well. I no understand poem. This does not show black
people. I am offended by poem. We are not slaves. I am a fisherman.
Comment 9 of 16, added on February 8th, 2007 at 10:24 PM.
This poem is nto right! We black people are not slaves...what a failure of
Resov Namibia from Zimbabwe
Comment 8 of 16, added on April 13th, 2006 at 9:31 AM.
this poem if anything, discusses slave trade just like in most of his
poems. Arna bontemps mainly discusses, to what i believe, a deeper meaning
in the slave trade. (ie. how they felt by saying that "we do not come to
wage a strife") this could be a stretch..but to me it means that the slaves
werent the ones wanting to fight. all they asked for was freedom and that
is all the want/ needed but it was the slave owner who started and ended
every argument and fight. Arna is now bringing back the past and putting it
into reality today becuase alot of what went on then, is still going on now
to some extent. Though not nearly as agressive, of course, but in people's
mind they have about the same idea. Racism is just another problem in
today's society, and Bontemps expresses a great deal of it in about every
single one of his works.
from United States
Comment 7 of 16, added on January 5th, 2006 at 10:55 AM.
from United States
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