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first of all..i am not a critic..just someone who enjoys poetry..and on
that basis i form my opinions..
i like how the words are paired up..the the imagery is amazing..but i found
the 'set up' or how the poem is laid out too hard to be able to keep a flow
going..and for 'a kiss' it seemed too frenetic..but maybe that is the way
you like to kiss..
maurya bourandanis from Australia