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Comment 10 of 10, added on May 6th, 2009 at 11:42 AM.
this poem seems to be about a place where you can go and nothing bad can
happen to you. all the troubles that you're running from go away and you
can focus on all the good. the children part was kind of confusing but i
guess that is just that the purity and innocence of the young is what makes
this place so amazing. where the sidewalk ends can be anywhere, a dream, a
place where you go and everything that you worry about just seems not to
matter anymore and the curuption of anything that has happened to you goes
away. there is no judgement. its just a place to free of who you are.
stephanie from United States
Comment 9 of 10, added on March 25th, 2009 at 4:59 PM.
This poem is totally awesome. When I was little my teacher asked us to
choose our favorite poem from Shel and I thought this poem was total lol it
is was so cool of him to write this.
Erika Zamora from United States
Comment 8 of 10, added on March 15th, 2009 at 9:09 PM.
This poem is true to life this poet made a good point if you do not get the
point keep reading it over and ov er and you will get the
point!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Terajae boo and I deticate this poem to leon davis I
luv LEON
Terajae from United States
Comment 7 of 10, added on December 11th, 2008 at 9:59 AM.
This poem for me implies death. the end of the road is the end of life
Tyler from United States
Comment 6 of 10, added on December 7th, 2008 at 7:56 PM.
Your poems rock, but you been dead for years so you can't see this anyway.
Joe
Comment 5 of 10, added on June 8th, 2008 at 6:23 PM.
Your poems are something no one can discribe there soo awsome like that i
think you are one of the best poem writers that will ever live wish you
luck !
*******Melissa*********
melissa hibbs from United States
Comment 4 of 10, added on January 1st, 2008 at 8:27 PM.
This poem is realle, very optimistic and light hearted. What I got out of
it was that if you are in a time in your life where you are struggling,
look forward because there are better things ahead.
Sandy from United States
Comment 3 of 10, added on May 10th, 2007 at 4:39 PM.
I like your poems they are awsome
dallas padgett from United States
Comment 2 of 10, added on May 3rd, 2007 at 9:27 PM.
your poems r da bomb!!!super funny :). all your poems r
sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ryanlee from United States
Comment 1 of 10, added on May 3rd, 2007 at 9:25 PM.
this poem is really funny. i like all of your poems!
they're da bomb!!!!!!!
p.s. im 9 turning ten years old!!
Ryan from United States
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this poem seems to be about a place where you can go and nothing bad can
happen to you. all the troubles that you're running from go away and you
can focus on all the good. the children part was kind of confusing but i
guess that is just that the purity and innocence of the young is what makes
this place so amazing. where the sidewalk ends can be anywhere, a dream, a
place where you go and everything that you worry about just seems not to
matter anymore and the curuption of anything that has happened to you goes
away. there is no judgement. its just a place to free of who you are.
stephanie from United States