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Comment 105 of 205, added on November 28th, 2005 at 5:43 PM.
This is a cool and funny poem. I liked it alot
Torjia Callaham from United States
Comment 104 of 205, added on November 28th, 2005 at 5:10 AM.
Autumn leaves are falling and they don't make a sound,
gently swirling softly until they reach the ground.
Colours will amaze you, Oranges, Yellows and Reds,
making homes for creatures among the flower beds.
Winter breezes blowing will leave the trees quite bare,
but the colours of the Autumn will stay and linger there. To remind us of
the Summer when all was warm and green and all of natures splendours again
in Springtime can be seen. I LIKED THE IDEA OF A POEM CALLED MESSY ROOM
ITS AN IMAGINATIVE TITLE AN ORIGINAL.
rozzylou from United Kingdom
Comment 103 of 205, added on November 28th, 2005 at 5:02 AM.
Autumn leaves are falling and they don't make a sound,
rozzylou from United Kingdom
Comment 102 of 205, added on November 17th, 2005 at 2:42 PM.
that was a great poem sounds a loy like my room
sammy from New Zealand
Comment 101 of 205, added on November 11th, 2005 at 8:31 AM.
this is meant more for the organizers of this site, with no offense
intended for the author or anything. I liked this poem, but does it really
belong in the top 40?
bob from United States
Comment 100 of 205, added on November 9th, 2005 at 6:24 PM.
I luv the poem! It sounds like a dog house.
Brittany from Australia
Comment 99 of 205, added on November 9th, 2005 at 1:10 AM.
this poem is simple and subtle..a little strange for a poem but then thats
the beauty of it..The innocence that this poem exudes would appeal to every
person whose own room remains ina frenzy 24/7 and does not give a damn
about it...callousness is away of life isnt it?
aatish from India
Comment 98 of 205, added on November 3rd, 2005 at 5:21 PM.
you have a very talented and skilled writting. i had a great time reading
your comments. discontent makes rich men poor: http://www.bartleby.com/100/
, an investment in knowledge pays the best interest , most people are even
incapable
michael brown from USA
Comment 97 of 205, added on November 3rd, 2005 at 8:31 PM.
Dear Shel,
I love poems and love writting them. But this one is the best i ever
heard. Well i"ll show you a poem i wrote
Halloween Night
On halloween night
I get a big fright
All the candy getting passed out
We all scream and shout
I saw all kinds of things
I even saw a witch sing
My cousin Jake
Got a stomach ach
The night is over
But wheres my dog Rover?
betty from United States
Comment 96 of 205, added on November 2nd, 2005 at 7:33 PM.
ALRITEEE thx for the poem im using for my homework!!!
aymeric from France
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This is a cool and funny poem. I liked it alot
Torjia Callaham from United States