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Comment 4 of 4, added on September 16th, 2007 at 6:38 PM.
this was a great poem but it doesn't really sound like assonance... sorry.
But other than that it was really GOOD!!!
crystal from Australia
Comment 3 of 4, added on December 20th, 2005 at 11:45 AM.
i love this poem...it speaks truth and sensuality. it has awesome grammer
too
Nick Dinglebarry from United States
Comment 2 of 4, added on April 24th, 2005 at 1:24 AM.
Sara speaks with much knowledge in this work of art!How true that when the
magic fades in love sometimes no matter what it almost becomes useless and
is not even good for the soul anymore...happiness can get lost....and
bitterness can take over,one can not find use for that person that used to
make their heart soar.
Sea from Canada
Comment 1 of 4, added on April 20th, 2005 at 8:17 PM.
Its allright
Tabitha from United States
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this was a great poem but it doesn't really sound like assonance... sorry.
But other than that it was really GOOD!!!
crystal from Australia