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Comment 3 of 3, added on February 20th, 2009 at 10:43 PM.
Lost Faith. Trust...
i never got to say bye. i never got over your death.
the past four years since your death my life was sad and horrible, i always
missed you. i always believed in only you and always wanted you to answer
me. where were you when i cryed, where were you when i was alone of hurt.
i've become something that im not sure of; if i am. so i lost faith, trust
in you. and i also lost you. when will you answer me? when will you help
me?
to my dad.
Dulce from United States
Comment 2 of 3, added on July 27th, 2005 at 7:34 AM.
I love poams, they are so cool to read. About love and happness! About
peole you love and about your kids that you love too. Poams can make some
one that is mad be happy! i can not right poams that good but I do no when
i am bord and I sit downa nd white one some how it come out to be a good
poam! I am just looking for a good monkey poam to give to some one I love
so much!
Jessica from United States
Comment 1 of 3, added on February 7th, 2005 at 2:50 PM.
I really enjoyed the poem you wrote. "The Family Monkey" was really good!
I liked the way you used your words! Well I have to go for now! bye
Joel Gonzalez from United States
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Lost Faith. Trust...
i never got to say bye. i never got over your death.
the past four years since your death my life was sad and horrible, i always
missed you. i always believed in only you and always wanted you to answer
me. where were you when i cryed, where were you when i was alone of hurt.
i've become something that im not sure of; if i am. so i lost faith, trust
in you. and i also lost you. when will you answer me? when will you help
me?
to my dad.
Dulce from United States