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I did not like this poem I dont think Paul Laurence Dunbar makes any sense
when he writes his poems he is not on his own level when he is writing his
poems i think he writes kiddy poem even little kids will fall asleep when
they read his poems I just don't think he is a good poet he really needs to
give up poetry and try to focus his talent on something else because i
don't think poetry is his thing. To me if it didn't catch my eye that means
i didn't like it and i thought that they should have never been published i
think that back than that may have been a good poem but now its just
nothing good about it and sorry to say when you write a poem I think first
you should ask yourself will this catch the readers eyes but i also think
that i can write a better poem than you that is just how i feel deep down
inside and that is what your suppose to do you are suppose to reach deep
down on the inside and find your true feelings and make a poem out of that
than see how far it will take you.
Monique Johnson from United States