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here is one i wrote for mine he loved it i am sure your bf will tooBeneath
the tree we sit togetherWind whniiltsg through the leavesAs he reaches for
my handA shiver runs down my backUnable to do anything but turn up my
lipsInto a smile, our eyes lockedOur souls are wound together and
lockedForever togetherA soft “I love you” comes from his lipsI pray in
my mind that he never leavesThe tree rough against my backHere we are now
hand in hand‘Don’t ever let go of my hand’This is where they shall
stay, lockedNever to the real world will we go backIn our own world we will
stay… togetherJumping in piles of leaves I part my lipsBut nothing comes
out of my lipsSo to say it I tightly squeeze his handHe looks at me with an
intensity that leavesMy heart thumping and the rhythm lockedPerhaps we will
always be togetherNever looking backWould we ever come back?Once again I
turned up my lipsHim returning the gesture making the picture of us
togetherComplete. To lighten the moment I swung my handOur fingers tightly
locked A beautiful season with all of the falling leavesBursts of colors
caught my eye, all the random leavesOne brushes down my backOur lives
completely lockedAnd for the first time our lipsBrush together, another
tight squeeze, this time from his handNow until the end of time, we are
togetherNever do we look back, only ahead do we see the leavesAway together
we walk hand in handNow our lips turned up and eyes locked

Erika from Namibia

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Poet: Nick Carbo
Poem: Running Amok
Added: Apr 21 2005
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Poem of the Day: Jul 4 2005

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