Comment 81 of 123, added on January 26th, 2006 at 1:49 PM.
I got this poem from a friend of mine(jess) who definitely understands me
more than i let on. She sent me this poem because this is exactly how my
life is.. I feel like im a bird in a cage and the only song that i have is
of freedom. As the poem kept going, i realized that Maya Angelou is right
about the fact that the free bird thinks of another "breeze" while the bird
that is caged only constantly thinks about freedom and the dreams they
would have if they were free. That is exactly how i felt too. This
correlates to me because my life is similar to this in so many ways.
Parents have no right to cage their children and my message is that if they
do they will suffer and make their children suffer as well. I dont have to
sing for freedom anymore because i have it. But i will never be truly
free from my parents grasp if i dont let them go completely. Financially,
and emotionally..
but my two cents to this poem are that i love it, that Maya Angelou knew
the message she wanted to convey and she did and it came out loud and
clear, the price of freedom, the duality between having freedom and not
having it... i love this poem. i'm going to first thank jess for sending it
to me and then im going to print it out and keep it by me. It's very
inspiring, and i thank maya for writing this poem.. it definitely
described my feelings within.
Surrosh from
United States
Comment 74 of 123, added on December 1st, 2005 at 1:31 AM.
Analysis
I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings
Maya Angelou’s touching poem revolves around the theme of freedom. On the
subject of freedom Maya Angelou impressively uses effective metaphors,
choice words that resemble her people, themes, diction, rhythm scheme,
imagery, and paradoxes that bring out within Maya and the reader feelings
that represent thriving anger and injustice. Justification implied in the
title demonstration how the speaker, the poet, can feel what her people
went through when slavery was around.
In the first stanza, Maya Angelou uses imagery to show display to the
reader how the soul is so alive and filled with excitement when it is free
and unbounded from impulsiveness. Angelou uses imageries that are so strong
to invoke such thoughts of being imprisoned come across the spirit of the
unbounded bird. “Leaps on the back of the wind” and “dips his wings in the
orange sun rays” enrich the readers senses to reflect on thought of being
so free and alive. The choice of words that Angelou uses reflect that
simple natural elements of nature represent a visual play ground for the
bird. The reader imagines an energetic bird flying so high into the sky
where he has reached the furthest and no longer can fly anymore; a bird
living life to the fullest and have that great choice to guide himself
where ever he wants to. These word that are transcribed by Maya give the
reader a colorful feeling of happiness.
In the next stanza, however, Maya writes in depressing and stark voice.
Such images and metaphors that are completely opposite from those of the
first stanza.
“Narrow cage”, “bars of rage” and “wings are clipped” express a feeling of
terror and fear. The irony and paradox shown in this stanza are displayed
in magnitude because of the pleasant imageries in the first stanza. “Bars
of rage”, a metaphor that represents the imprisonment of innocent slaves
throughout history. This unpleasant dissimilarity makes the reader want to
have sympathy from the bound bird. As the reader wants to show sympathy
they cannot help thing why such an unjust act was done to this bird.
Ironically the drawn out cruel life that the bird owns as compared to the
free bird makes his destiny seem so far conquered by misfortune.
The choice of words additionally adds sadness and grief to the eyes of the
reader. “Grave of dreams”, a metaphor, creates a sorrow because the imagery
echo’s itself to despair and misery. The irony that extends the poem is
that tragic fact that the bird still sings. In the last stanza “The caged
bird sings with a fearful trill of things unknown but longed for still”
represents that even thou he is inescapable his dreams and future are still
there edging the fact that they might seem impossible. This verse gives the
reader hope that even in the toughest moments they will overcome. The
alliteration found in the poem stretches the idea of the depression the
reader admires about the caged bird. The repetition in “shadows shouts on a
nightmare scream” creates an effect of strong determination that does not
fade regardless of the harsh circumstances the bird faces.
In the rhyming of the poem each stanza follows the rhyming scheme of AAAB,
as in the 3rd and 6th stanza. The flexibility of the first two lines in the
stanza following a rhyming scheme symbolizes the imprisonment of the bird.
However, the third line in the same stanza is unique and does not follow
the prior rhyming scheme. The last line of the rhyming scheme gives hope to
the bird which signifies that as long as the bird sing his dream of freedom
will come true. Analysis
I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings
Maya Angelou’s touching poem revolves around the theme of freedom. On the
subject of freedom Maya Angelou impressively uses effective metaphors,
choice words that resemble her people, themes, diction, rhythm scheme,
imagery, and paradoxes that bring out within Maya and the reader feelings
that represent thriving anger and injustice. Justification implied in the
title demonstration how the speaker, the poet, can feel what her people
went through when slavery was around.
In the first stanza, Maya Angelou uses imagery to show display to the
reader how the soul is so alive and filled with excitement when it is free
and unbounded from impulsiveness. Angelou uses imageries that are so strong
to invoke such thoughts of being imprisoned come across the spirit of the
unbounded bird. “Leaps on the back of the wind” and “dips his wings in the
orange sun rays” enrich the readers senses to reflect on thought of being
so free and alive. The choice of words that Angelou uses reflect that
simple natural elements of nature represent a visual play ground for the
bird. The reader imagines an energetic bird flying so high into the sky
where he has reached the furthest and no longer can fly anymore; a bird
living life to the fullest and have that great choice to guide himself
where ever he wants to. These word that are transcribed by Maya give the
reader a colorful feeling of happiness.
In the next stanza, however, Maya writes in depressing and stark voice.
Such images and metaphors that are completely opposite from those of the
first stanza.
“Narrow cage”, “bars of rage” and “wings are clipped” express a feeling of
terror and fear. The irony and paradox shown in this stanza are displayed
in magnitude because of the pleasant imageries in the first stanza. “Bars
of rage”, a metaphor that represents the imprisonment of innocent slaves
throughout history. This unpleasant dissimilarity makes the reader want to
have sympathy from the bound bird. As the reader wants to show sympathy
they cannot help thing why such an unjust act was done to this bird.
Ironically the drawn out cruel life that the bird owns as compared to the
free bird makes his destiny seem so far conquered by misfortune.
The choice of words additionally adds sadness and grief to the eyes of the
reader. “Grave of dreams”, a metaphor, creates a sorrow because the imagery
echo’s itself to despair and misery. The irony that extends the poem is
that tragic fact that the bird still sings. In the last stanza “The caged
bird sings with a fearful trill of things unknown but longed for still”
represents that even thou he is inescapable his dreams and future are still
there edging the fact that they might seem impossible. This verse gives the
reader hope that even in the toughest moments they will overcome. The
alliteration found in the poem stretches the idea of the depression the
reader admires about the caged bird. The repetition in “shadows shouts on a
nightmare scream” creates an effect of strong determination that does not
fade regardless of the harsh circumstances the bird faces.
In the rhyming of the poem each stanza follows the rhyming scheme of AAAB,
as in the 3rd and 6th stanza. The flexibility of the first two lines in the
stanza following a rhyming scheme symbolizes the imprisonment of the bird.
However, the third line in the same stanza is unique and does not follow
the prior rhyming scheme. The last line of the rhyming scheme gives hope to
the bird which signifies that as long as the bird sing his dream of freedom
will come true.
elsaruiz16 from
United States
Why did Maya Angelou write this poem? Does anybody know exactly what she
means? And no, please no comments from drama queens who think that the
poem was written specifically for them.
Zach Green