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Comment 8 of 8, added on May 18th, 2006 at 2:46 PM.
i think that you have some really nice poem... especially the one called
"Too Blue." i think that it was a really nice poem and that is how i am
feeling right now... plus life is not as easy as you think it is... you
might think that no on cares but the truth is that all the people around
you still cares a lot.
Stacy from United States
Comment 7 of 8, added on February 13th, 2006 at 1:52 PM.
i love your peoms i belived it wonderful and real.
Jzmayca from United States
Comment 6 of 8, added on October 4th, 2005 at 7:14 PM.
Good poem. I really like it.
elizabeth from United States
Comment 5 of 8, added on September 25th, 2005 at 6:02 PM.
preach it
Zoe from Australia
Comment 4 of 8, added on June 14th, 2005 at 6:39 PM.
Britteney dye your hair brown it may help with yuor intellegence. And this
poem is a implied subject wehter we destroy or overcome our problems and
the readers decides their solution o this in thier own unique way which
makes you question who exactly you are. I will doubt that you can find that
out untill the last second you die, because that is when you are most
complete in life. Once you have experienced it.
P.S. Britteney learn how to spell
Genrel Red Harry Balls
Comment 3 of 8, added on February 10th, 2005 at 4:27 PM.
omg this is a awsome poemim like so into these things my mum said that i
should start lookinging and reasurching poems as the day fall the yander of
night comes out one of my very good friends once told me i love langston
he is one of my favorite nigro poem writers ... so if all could say yes i
love this poem it was made with great knolage
sencerly me brittney (and a great shout out goes out to my mum who reguired
me to look these things up hen iwas younger
brittney from United States
Comment 2 of 8, added on February 10th, 2005 at 4:27 PM.
omg this is a awsome poemim like so into these things my mum said that i
should start lookinging and reasurching poems as the day fall the yander of
night comes out one of my very good friends once told me i love langston
he is one of my favorite nigro poem writers ... so if all could say yes i
love this poem it was made with great knolage
sencerly me brittney (and a great shout out goes out to my mum who reguired
me to look these things up hen iwas younger
brittney from United Kingdom
Comment 1 of 8, added on November 3rd, 2004 at 8:12 PM.
THIS POEM OFFERS A CHILD-LIKE WAY OF ADULT FRUSTRATIONS, IN EVERYDAY LIFE.
AS WE GO OFF TO OUR DAY, WE FACE UNEXPECTED PROBLEMS IN WHICH WE HAVE TO
DEAL WITH IN OUR OWN WAY. WHETER WE DO IT IN A PRODUCTIVE WAY, OR A
DISTRUCTIVE WAY IS NOT IMPLIED,RATHER, IT IS LEFT UP TO US. YES, IT IS THE
BLUES.KIDS DEAL WITH IT EVERY DAY AS WELL AS WE DO. LET US TEACH THEM A
BETTER WAY,OR KISS OUR ASSES GOODBYE.MR.HUGHES WAS BEING REAL ABOUT HOW
SOME SEE LIFE'S HAPPENINGS.I STILL GET THE BLUES, BUT ALWAYS KNOW THAT
TOMMORROW IS A BRAND NEW DAY!
Tina from United States
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i think that you have some really nice poem... especially the one called
"Too Blue." i think that it was a really nice poem and that is how i am
feeling right now... plus life is not as easy as you think it is... you
might think that no on cares but the truth is that all the people around
you still cares a lot.
Stacy from United States