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This guy is undoubtedly a poet - look at the first lines. But does he need
to discipline himself more? There's a tremendous thought in the first lines
which seems to peter out. Maybe I'm too lazy, or maybe he expects his
reader to work too hard.
Kevin Straw from United Kingdom