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Comment 2 of 2, added on November 5th, 2012 at 8:42 AM.
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to Elsa: Alone:
I and the sunray and the memory
Of childhood years and the true fears
As the birds wake up at their oak tree
And the shy moon away disappears
I know not where and no longer shone
Now, the heart in peace, I am alone
Altir Laahad (All Rights Reserved)
Altair Laahad
Comment 1 of 2, added on March 9th, 2009 at 10:29 AM.
This poem does´nt speak to me it doesn´t make any since at all.I dislike
everything about it specially the missing of mentioning sheeps the best
creature known to man...
The man from New Zealand
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to Elsa: Alone:
I and the sunray and the memory
Of childhood years and the true fears
As the birds wake up at their oak tree
And the shy moon away disappears
I know not where and no longer shone
Now, the heart in peace, I am alone
Altir Laahad (All Rights Reserved)
Altair Laahad