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Poet: Conrad Aiken
Poem: Music I Heard
Comment 1 of 1, added on September 1st, 2008 at 1:53 PM.
This is a beautiful poem and I'm glad you included it. However, one correction needs to be made. The word "that" isn't in the first line of the third stanza. That line should read thusly: "For it was in my heart you moved among them". Try it, you'll see why. It's more rhythmic, it fits better, and it's what Aiken wrote.
Overdog from United States
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This is a beautiful poem and I'm glad you included it. However, one correction needs to be made. The word "that" isn't in the first line of the third stanza. That line should read thusly: "For it was in my heart you moved among them". Try it, you'll see why. It's more rhythmic, it fits better, and it's what Aiken wrote.
Overdog from United States