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Comment 3 of 3, added on June 4th, 2008 at 5:30 AM.
this poem arises a beatifule and alive sense to us , a
seence which may fresh dark and bitter mood of day ,it was very good by now
which everything appears bitter !!! thanks.Majid FM Iran
majid from Iran
Comment 2 of 3, added on April 10th, 2006 at 1:42 PM.
This is a poem that reminds me of that first perfect spring day, when
magically, overnight, fields are green and daffodils and dandelions are
everywhere!
My version of March Madness
when last night while I slept
vandals were afoot
red breasted birds burt with news of the
windy moon
stealhily spraying all the fields green,
trees blushing wiht what they've seen
moon dancing on lawns
decoringing them with daffodils and dandelions!
The sun, even refusing to go to bed!
Spring!
llynette from Armenia
Comment 1 of 3, added on January 19th, 2005 at 2:19 AM.
THis is a beautiful poem!
ruth from United States
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this poem arises a beatifule and alive sense to us , a
seence which may fresh dark and bitter mood of day ,it was very good by now
which everything appears bitter !!! thanks.Majid FM Iran
majid from Iran