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Comment 2 of 2, added on November 9th, 2006 at 10:42 PM.
I didn't count it. Is it really 136 syllables. If it were me it wouldn't
be and people who had counted would say, hey, it's not the right number.
If it really is 136 syllables I wonder what that says about him, that he
actually counted them and gave his poem that title. I liked it. Again, I
like his vocabulary. I like warble and Pleaides right there together.
wow. good images. I could almost see it all as it must have actually
happened, which I suppose is the art of a great poet.
Shelley Fruiterer from United States
Comment 1 of 2, added on February 28th, 2006 at 5:57 PM.
Strange poem once you get to read it, mainly because it's making emphasis
on multiple things, and also evokes different day times in a single
reaction. Nevertheless, great poem by Ginsberg.
Can Tank from Mexico
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I didn't count it. Is it really 136 syllables. If it were me it wouldn't
be and people who had counted would say, hey, it's not the right number.
If it really is 136 syllables I wonder what that says about him, that he
actually counted them and gave his poem that title. I liked it. Again, I
like his vocabulary. I like warble and Pleaides right there together.
wow. good images. I could almost see it all as it must have actually
happened, which I suppose is the art of a great poet.
Shelley Fruiterer from United States