This is what I would like to write:
I depend of what you think of me,
I depend of your moulding heart,
I depend of your true decisions,
of your unexpected woes and wraths,
of repetition of your lovely words,
of fairy tales about sleeping princess,
I depend of the laws of imagination
that you write and know better than me,
I depend of your blinking eyes
of your soothing lips and your long legs,
I depend of your dreaming intelligence,
I depend of your insight strokes,
of your travels around everywhere
I depend of you and only you,
and all what you mean ,
this is my declaration of dependence.
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Comments (2)
July 10th, 2009 at 2:12 am
you’re a true man after my own heart - yann!
those are very bold & brave declarations that cowardly men would never make!
there’s so much yak yak about independence - when need becomes a weakness - & yakitty-yak
i’m glad you’ve said it - the way it should be - you’re a brave man - yann!
this is soooooweeeeeeeeet!!
July 10th, 2009 at 4:11 am
Excellent poem, yann. I intend to give a copy of it to my next girlfriend so that we have no misunderstandings right from the start!
Take care,
frank