all we can do is to share
cause to be right is wrong,
cause to be alone is not a solution,
you can only guess and not explain
why dew is transparent or kisses
never unpleasant, all you can do
is to share, you like trees and breeze
you admit they are everyday new
and that’s it, you admit you love
that pertinent and persuasive girl,
and that’s it, she is everyday new too
and so many things, so many things
cause every second of life and fear
all you can do is to share,
cause to be right is wrong, whatever works
and to be wrong is also wrong.
Added: on Wednesday, July 1st, 2009 at 11:54 am | Viewed: 90 times, 1 so far today | Comments (3)
like your concept of right being wrong & wrong also wrong! &:
‘every second of life and fear
all you can do is to share,’ - how true! indeed we’re better off sharing & you’re right - “being alone is not a solution”
nothing to beat sharing!
but what happens to kisses when they’re well calculated? don’t they become mathematical?
really like the qualities of the girl - pertinent & persuasive - nice!
thanks Clematis for the interesting comment….You enlight the poem….I think we are always judged and people don’t like people who are right as they don’t like people who are wrong….There is unbalance whatever people try, i can see for myself and for people around …all you can do is to exchange because we are negligeable ….That keeps us alive …Thank you again for the comment….
Hey Yann — Just want to let you know I am reading you posts and will comment but life has been a bit hectic just now…. More in a couple weeks. In the meantime, be well!
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Poet:yann rolland Poem:All you can do Viewed: 90 times, 1 so far today Added: on Wednesday, July 1st, 2009 at 11:54 am
July 2nd, 2009 at 2:17 am
like your concept of right being wrong & wrong also wrong! &:
‘every second of life and fear
all you can do is to share,’ - how true! indeed we’re better off sharing & you’re right - “being alone is not a solution”
nothing to beat sharing!
but what happens to kisses when they’re well calculated? don’t they become mathematical?
really like the qualities of the girl - pertinent & persuasive - nice!
July 2nd, 2009 at 5:08 am
thanks Clematis for the interesting comment….You enlight the poem….I think we are always judged and people don’t like people who are right as they don’t like people who are wrong….There is unbalance whatever people try, i can see for myself and for people around …all you can do is to exchange because we are negligeable ….That keeps us alive …Thank you again for the comment….
yann
July 2nd, 2009 at 6:18 am
Hey Yann — Just want to let you know I am reading you posts and will comment but life has been a bit hectic just now…. More in a couple weeks. In the meantime, be well!