I woke up in the morning,
As if I have slept in the night!
I thought I am missing you the most,
Yawned and with dozy puffed eyes saw my refection,
It was half!
As if I was complete ever and you have left !
I thought I am missing you the most,
I brushed and bathed and tried to gulp my breakfast,
It denied!
As if you were my stomach !
I thought I am missing you the most,
Started crawling towards my workplace,
It seemed to be at infinity !
As if you were my limbs to fly !
I thought I am missing you the most,
Moving in the market, I felt naked,
Sun was harshest today !
As if you were my shelter !
I thought I am missing you the most,
Its evening and now I am trying to fly back,
As if I will find you in the home!
I thought I am missing you the most,
You were nowhere in the house,
Now trying to sleep,
As if I will sleep!
I thought I am missing you the most.

6 Responses to “I thought I am missing you the most…..”

1. yann rolland Says:
   September 29th, 2009 at 1:16 pm

   hello Nitish, where have you been ? I am happy to read you again ..Your subject is a pretty way to log in again…

   have a nice day

   yann

2. Nitish shubhankar Says:
   September 29th, 2009 at 1:31 pm

   thnkx Yann……….joind Pepsi sales team………..so was bit busy wid my newly found life and its ways !

3. oxygon Says:
   September 29th, 2009 at 2:03 pm

   Hey, Nitish, I echo yann’s thoughts—it’s good to see you back, and in good form. It’s good to have someone to miss most of all out of the possibilities in the day of a life. I like the use of the subject in the text of the poem, and the repetition of the line. Hope you don’t stay away so long!

   Regards — art

4. Nitish shubhankar Says:
   September 29th, 2009 at 2:37 pm

   i am not !….but i am …………thanks oxy……..you are a constant inspiration for me ………..nd that gravitational pull which forces me to fall at this place……………

5. clematis Says:
   October 5th, 2009 at 3:02 am

   hi nitish - where are you? or rather where were you? pepsi sales team eh? good for you! hope you’re working hard young man!

   here we’re submerged in floods! what’s the weather like in delhi?

   really like your poem nitish - great to see you’re still in love & up to your old tricks - heh! heh! that’s how it should be!

   i like the way you’ve completely absorbed the loved one into your system! she’s everything & everywhere - great concept nitish

   really love the opening:

   i woke up in the morning
   as if i slept in the night!

6. Nitish shubhankar Says:
   October 14th, 2009 at 9:54 am

   sorry i am not hiting this place on regular basis clema !

   bit busy ofcourse !

   my only problem is clema that i every time i see her i want 2 say i love you !……..nd every time i feel that i am missing her the most…………so can you cerebral people make some more adjective for me……….yes after most what should i use now !

   i am writing ……….but unable to post and comment on regular basis…………..and ray !……..leave it.

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