World behind my wall
A place no one else can find
A place were I can be alone
A place were I don’t have to speak
A place that has no memories
A place that doesn’t tear me
A place to call your own
A place were no one is allowed
A place that keeps others out
A place to feel alive
A place were I am sane
A place that has no light
A place to choose no side
A place were I can be lost
A place that is all and nothing
A place to have no reason to hide
That place could be in your mind
A world behind your wall
Added: on Monday, November 9th, 2009 at 4:44 am | Viewed: 39 times, 2 so far today | Comments (2)
This poem mentioned many places, but to me, none is better than “A place to feel alive.” Yet, I think that a place in Christ shouldn’t be left out; then, in your next poem it would be nice to add a place in Christ. Waiting to read more poems from you.
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Poet:ecko09 Poem:Your own wall Viewed: 39 times, 2 so far today Added: on Monday, November 9th, 2009 at 4:44 am
Comments (2)
November 9th, 2009 at 12:45 pm
Hello, the best wall to my eyes is love, it authorizes a lot of other wall and make them robust…Thanks for sharing.
yann
November 9th, 2009 at 3:17 pm
This poem mentioned many places, but to me, none is better than “A place to feel alive.” Yet, I think that a place in Christ shouldn’t be left out; then, in your next poem it would be nice to add a place in Christ. Waiting to read more poems from you.